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“I tried to speak but no words came”.

FRASE ESCOGIDA:  “I tried to speak but no words came”.

1º CATEGORÍA ( 1ºESO,2ºESO,3ºESO)

GANADORA:: MARÍA LÓPEZ MACHUCA   3ºESO A

I could hear her supernatural labored breathing behind the mirror. My daughter, that innocent girl so full of life, now was squirming and squealing in agony. I tried to speak, to ask for help, but no words came. From there, I only get to remember my tears mixed with my girl¨s blood and that blow with an axe on my neck that finished with my life.

Ten years later, my body is rotting in a tomb, but my wound remains opened. I know you¨re listening to me right now, so I¨´ m just going to say it to you once: you¨ll be sorry for having killed my daughter.

FINALISTA: MIGUEL SILES LÓPEZ  3º ESO A

Alter having a shower, Gabriel sat in his bed, with his computer and he saw a new audio-chat. He accepted it and someone said: “Hi, Gabriel” with a gentle voice. Gabriel said: “How do you know my name?” He responded: “Because I have been looking to yoou... In fact,  I´m looking to you now”.With a pale face, Gabriel ran to the window. No one was in his street. He heard in his computer: “And why don´t you look just under your bed?”. Holding his breath, Gabriel looked under his bed. He tried to speak, but no words came.

2º CATEGORÍA ( 4º ESO,1ºBACH, 2ºBACH )

1º PREMIO: Mª ÁNGELES ARENAS PAREJA 4º B

Fear seized me. My hands, cold and trembling, approached his face. I could see my reflection in his bright eyes. I tried to speak, but no words came. Suddenly I noticed as a bullet went through my chest. That mysterious being had fisnished with my life. In my last few minutes of life, I listened to Mike shouting a painful one “I love you”. The being pounced upon him and, just as he did to me, he ripped his life.

 FINALISTA: FRANCISCO JAVIER PÉREZ JIMÉNEZ. 4ºB

I was in that strange room and I didn´t know how I got in but when I tried to know it was too late, I felt a strange sensation through my body. I saw my mother beside me clutching my hand. I could feel her heat, but each moment was passing I was feeling how I lost energy I tried to speak, but no words came, in that moment I saw a strange white light and I became to feel better. I said goodbye closing my eyes.